as a career one day :) And I wrote this song about how one of my best
friends betrayed me. And then how she came over one day acting like
everything was all normal when we haven't spoken in 7 months! And
Taylor Swift really inspires me to sing, and write my own music. BUT
PLEASE DON'T STEAL MY LYRICS I OWN THEM ALL :) AND it's BEING
COPYRIGHTED AS WE SPEAK, I just wanted some opinions on the lyrics.
And I'm only 18 and just a beginner writer so please don't be to
harsh. But I hope you like it :) Thanks in advance :) And if you have
any title name ideas please let me know I'd really appriciate it :)
Here it is, and I hope you like it :) And it's supposed to be like an
upbeat country-pop song :)
All your little lies,
Have You kept trying, trying, hard but, you just keep sinking
In your little cought up self,
With no words left but, "it's about me"
All your little stupid songs,
(slow part of verse)
Have become dirty little secrets that I know now
Once you crept up on me, I could finally see,
Who you were ment to be.
And everything just ended up to be so wrong….
Chorus (fast)
What you've been doing all along, is just playing stupid silly songs
Just waiting all day long, and through the middle of the night
And trembling all around,
When you came around, I know what you are now,
But how do I know?? How do I know?? (oh, oh)
You have to figure it out!
I treasured our long time, but it was all just silly little lies,
That I could never quite figure out why, but until you
Stopped by to say hello.
But even then, I never new,
How much you didn't know, about me
Chorusx1
When we stayed up all night long,
You told me all your secrets,
It was a usual saturday night
Just waiting 'til the light,
And I told you something like
Your new best friend, is just testing you to see
How far you'll go along,
With all her stupid silly songs!
(Oh) with her stupid silly songs,
Chorusx1
(Pre- Verse)
I'm not figuring it out, myself,
You have to do it all yourself!
Your gunna have to figure out what your gunna
do with your life,
It's just time to say goodbye,
and never say hello again
You were walking down a bumpy road
When you finally came to town
When I was listening to my favorite music playing last night
It's the music that was ringing in my ear all along,
Just saying that it was time to let you go for good.
Just say goodbye now,
And never come back to town,
Until you've changed your ways, and changed your mind
You were just playing, and saying stupid silly songs
And when you'd change your ways,
You'll be swaying all night long
Chorus x2
Your new best friend, is just testing you to see
How long your gunna be,
Until you finally see,
Who she's ending' up to be
Why are you with a friend like that??
I thought I new you better than that!
Why can't we be, like we used to be
Just wait until you finally can see,
Who she's gunna end up to be!
She's just testing you!
She's just testing you! (Woah, woah, oh, oh)
Chorus x1
Maybe soon, we can be like we used to be
But why are you with a friend like that??
I thought I knew you better than that!
She's just testing you, she's just using you.
Until you'll finally see,
Who she'll end up to be! (yeah, oh, oh woah)
Who she'll end up to be
You were just testing me,
You were just using me,
You were just pesting me
To think that I would never know who you were
Truly ending up to be…
As I was just getting in my house, in the middle of the night
You were just sitting on my couch, as I turned on the light
Just thinking that we would mend things up tonight,
and hoping everything would end up alright, tonight
You thought things would end up alright,
But you just waited to long until you ended up hurting, me more
Than you could ever know, just by not talking to me anymore
I just walked you out to my door saying
You were just testing me,
You were just using me,
You were just pesting me
To think that I would never know who you were
Truly ending up being…
Chorus (slow first time of chorus, then fast second time)
What you've been doing all along, is just playing stupid silly songs
Just waiting all day long, and through the middle of the night
And trembling all around,
Thinking we would mend things up tonight
When you came around, I know what you are now,
But how do I know?? How do I know oh oh??
You could be dwelling on this, until the middle of the night, but
You have to figure it out your self!
Your were just testing me!
You were just TESTING ME!
YEAH!!!
I hope you like it :) And please DON'T STEAL MY LYRICS I OWN THEM ALL
:) BUt i hope you like it :) Thanks in advance :)
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